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Age/Gender: 24, Male
Location: The middle of Nowhere
Job: Fish-goat
I like cartoons.. alot.
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Exp. Points: 400 / 550
Exp. Rank #: 81,992
Voting Pow.: 4.82 votes
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Flash Reviews: 85
Music Reviews: 0
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That movie was so messy and all over the place I found it entertaining. Some nice outlines. Erm. I'd say put more time into your animations but I'm guessing you did all that on purpose and I personally have nothing against laziness. lol Keep on keepin' on! :D
Author's Response:
u kick ass! yeah
so ur score actually means 5x2 HAHA
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You should warn people who are epilectic lol
Author's Response:
I did.
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Great animation, highly enjoyable! :D
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Excellent quality animation.
I only have a SINGLE gripe. The 'newgrounds' styled round white eyes. What's with that in EVERY animtion on Ng's, its become a horrid visual cliche and it wasn't that great in the first place.
But honestly my gripe there means nothing because this was EXCELLENTLY fluid, wonderful eye happy animation. GREAT job. LOVED it. Very very very awesome well done thanks for making it! :D (Sound fit too! and wasn't in MONO! Bonus!)
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The art was well done, and the animation was fairly well done, and the amount of effort into the art and animation is definitely admirable! Nice length too! But the plot, jokes, and sound, was completely empty. And so was the style in my opinion. This was pretty much typical 'blue' or 'green' newgrounds portal stuff but that's really not saying much. I've seen better films from an emotional/substance perspective from a good number of regular 'greys'.
I don't know if you intentionally made this to please this particular audience, the newgrounds audience, or if you yourself are simply very young and still like this kind of thing, but with so much talent and such great discipline to put that much effort into your cartoons I'd like to see you explore other directions. Try making something that comes from you as a person rather than from cliche's or things that a 'group' of friends finds funny, or things you've already seen others do a little too many times.
I still really appreciate your cartoon and I'm glad that you are making them. I'm sorry for being so negative but feel that maybe this critisism might actually mean something to you, even if it doesn't, keep up what you love to do, even if its this stuff! ;D Best of luck, awesome effort, I felt like giving you a ten just for that and the anatomy, nice drawings man, truly :D See you again!
Author's Response:
Thanks I really appreciate you taking the time to give me some feedback, and helping me out. I'm pretty much just goofing off, and being young like you said. I only just started making flash so I'm still learning a lot about it. I really like making movies for people to see, and seeing what people like you think about them. Hang with me in the future, and I'm sure I'll get something thats more entertaining for different people out here. Especially once I get out of school, and away from math class. But I really do appreciate some criticism. It lets me know what I'm doing wrong. So thanks again for your time.
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Your animation skills are great. I loved watching every second of this visually. And the sound was done well too. When the owl says, "That's life" the first time is definitely funny but you killed the joke with the other two.
Still, that's my only complaint and it doesn't really matter.
The visuals in this were great. The animation was great and expressive, very cartoonish, and the humor was great too. WEll done all around. Great stuff!
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I like this for the simple fact that a muffin shat a muffin unto another muffin.
Author's Response:
But that's not all, the guy who got crushed was really a muffin in disguise eating another muffin. Plus they were in Muffinland, Muffinworld.
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This animation is very well done. Very fluid, nice work. Can't say I approve of the content. :D
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That song is very addicting ;D
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This is extremely well animated. Excellent. I could easily say that this animation is passable for even television. Some of the jokes are really good though I found a lot of them to be kind of dull. But I think that is because of the voice acting.
Its so strange but that's what I see the very least here on newgrounds. Good voice actors. It's the same with bands. There are a lot of really good musicians out there, but its much more rare to find a band with a good singer, and it makes all the difference to the average person who listens to the band. The same is true of animation. Even though all the other stuff, like animating and sound quality require much more skill, effort, and experience, good voice acting is still usually what sells it. And unfortunately, this voice acting, while not being as completely bad as most of what is on newgrounds, wasn't really that great either. It was like sub-undergrads quality voice acting, and with none of the unique cartoon voices like gimpy or cal, just with regular joe voices like Nitz and that drunk guy, only slightly worse.
Still, great animation. I'll watch these over and over just to see the great drawings.
Minus the main guys eyes. You should keep your style consistent and draw all the eyes in a similar stile. Preferably showing the whites.
Anyways, lots of work, great cartoon!
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