Score: 8

"Does."

submission: Life of a Toothbrush

date: September 22, 2008

A toothbrush DOES have a heart. Nice animation, I really enjoyed how cute his roundy eyes were.

Score: 7

"Great Animation, Bad Voices and Possibly Story"

submission: Angry Dog - Pheromones

date: September 4, 2008

The animation itself was great. Very clean, beautifully colorful, big screen. I really liked that a lot. The voice acting though, I'm sorry, wasn't very good. It was about the same as if you took a few random people standing in front of a bank and said, 'read this please'. The jokes too, weren't spectacular, though I may be wrong, I'd have to hear them read by the right voice actors maybe.

I'm sure newgrounds will give you generally good reviews because the high quality of the artwork and the fluidity of the animation. But if you are really serious about making cartoons (not saying you are, I personally make cartoons for the fun of it and mine are much worse than yours lol) but if you are, then I would seriously consider getting some voice actors.

I hate seeing such hard work an amazing animation thrown down the drain because one element isn't up to par. In this case that element is the voice acting, I'm pretty sure. Anyways, thank you for your time and for the wonderful cartoon and I look forward to more.

Again, great job on the animation.

Score: 10

"Excellent"

submission: Ultra Platformer Tutorial

date: August 28, 2008

Thanks for the tutorial.

Score: 7

"I like your setup."

submission: The Lonely Castle Crasher

date: August 26, 2008

I like your set up, only a handful of drawings and lots of manipulation. I could learn a lot from an animator like you, on how to be more economic with my drawings when I animate. That way you can put more into the quality. All the characters and the background were nice and clean, shiny. Good set up.

As for the story, I wasn't overly impressed but I am not really into this sort of thing so its just my own opinion. I still think you are a good animator and I hope you keep it up. :)

Score: 7

"Entertaining"

submission: you are my FRIEND

date: July 17, 2008

I was kept pretty entertained the whole time. Non stop movement pleases the brain for some reason. Some of those flashing lights were a bit much for me to look at, but whatever, it all fit into its hyper-active kitty-crewish type setting. Nice work!

Score: 10

"Ah."

submission: Advenntuers Of Mareo Man

date: July 16, 2008

Holy shit, that's funny. At first I thought, oh no, another cat-vote-five thingy, and then the sporadic, hyper-loud, and crazy mario cartoon came on. Hilarious! Good job.

Score: 4

"I've had PTSD"

submission: PTSD

date: March 14, 2008

Your info is a bit wrong. You said it never goes away but that's not true.
I've had it and yes, after a couple of years it can go away/you can be cured and return to being/feeling/thinking normal, depending on a person by person case. In my case, now the only problem I have to deal with is insomnia that is treatable with medication :) And I'm currently trying to get off of those too, so that I can be completely free, and it is going well.

Score: 7

"I liked the art style-."

submission: Jerry The Magical Poop

date: March 8, 2008

I liked the art style, it reminded me very much of John Kraufcluosinfskjnfsf you know who I mean. lol The Ren and Stimpy guy, Ripping friends, etc.

Score: 8

"Excellent Quality Animation"

submission: Alex Seryoua: Episode I

date: March 8, 2008

Great quality animation. Reminds me of Kim Possible and Sixteen type of styles. I think this could use better/less cliche dialogue however. And I'm not sure on the plot as of yet since this is the first episode. But man, VERY VERY tight amazing work on the art and animation. Awesome stuff, keep it up! (Sound wasn't to bad either ;D)

Score: 6

"Hiya!"

submission: Pretty Burdy!

date: March 6, 2008

Hiya, interesting stuff here. You asked for a critique and my only critique would be this: You can obviously draw pretty decent so my advice would be to balance out all that tweening with a couple of little frame-by-frame segments. For example her eye getting bigger, rather than having that tweened you could just draw two or three frames so that it looks more like a realistic eye-opening :D Cool stuff, keep on :)