Nice animation
The art was well done, and the animation was fairly well done, and the amount of effort into the art and animation is definitely admirable! Nice length too! But the plot, jokes, and sound, was completely empty. And so was the style in my opinion. This was pretty much typical 'blue' or 'green' newgrounds portal stuff but that's really not saying much. I've seen better films from an emotional/substance perspective from a good number of regular 'greys'.
I don't know if you intentionally made this to please this particular audience, the newgrounds audience, or if you yourself are simply very young and still like this kind of thing, but with so much talent and such great discipline to put that much effort into your cartoons I'd like to see you explore other directions. Try making something that comes from you as a person rather than from cliche's or things that a 'group' of friends finds funny, or things you've already seen others do a little too many times.
I still really appreciate your cartoon and I'm glad that you are making them. I'm sorry for being so negative but feel that maybe this critisism might actually mean something to you, even if it doesn't, keep up what you love to do, even if its this stuff! ;D Best of luck, awesome effort, I felt like giving you a ten just for that and the anatomy, nice drawings man, truly :D See you again!