Nice Length, Lots of Work, Great Effort, Good Toon
Buffalo? We are neighboors, lol Niagara Falls here. (Canada side)
I can see the Marc M influence in your writing, and in your voicing.
Your voice is a bit too smooth (like mine) too pull of this kind of humor, but the writing was really good and the art and animation too. I really liked it on the whole.
Your voice is good though, unlike 99% of people on NG's who ruin their cartoons with shitty regular-guy voices. Your voice sounds like you were meant to talk, but it doesn't fit this kind of humor. I'm not sure what kind of humor fits voices like ours but its not this kind. For this kind you need a voice like Marc M.
I would suggest you try to be less influenced, and try more to find your voice, find your funny, find the type of humor that suites your delivery. And then tell me what it is so I can do it too lol
Anyways overall, I liked this a lot, great job man! :D